Notepad Scribblings of a Hobby Poet
"bladed cyclone" Wonderful!tears of the sky fall to the ground
Very cool! I love how you used the words.
Nicely done with the words.Pamela
Wow - you did a great job of using the words in the prompt!
You managed to bring all those mechanical sounding words to life and made them move with great detail. Good stuff,Elizabeth
I can both hear and see that tornado.
Thanks all for the encouraging words!
Timely and excellent.
Much said in few words... very nice piece!~laurie
Sounds like Yasi. Wonderfully descriptive!
Interesting form. I like brief work, and mine is often brief. Nine lines, sometimes seven. Short lines too, five or seven syllables patterned after haiku.