February 09, 2011


Prompt from Poetic Asides:  write a "one of these days" poem
Prompt from Big Tent Poetry: write the cure for your "blues"

“And not only the creation, but we ourselves, who have the firstfruits of the Spirit, groan inwardly as we wait eagerly for … the redemption of our bodies” (Romans 8:23).

One of these days
a new morning will dawn,
shimmery with sunshine,
scented with sweet dew,
accented with birdsong,
cloudless skies of blue.

And I will arise
no longer world-weary,
strong and beautiful,
alive with abundance,
free from infirmities,
perfect and whole.

And on that day
morning will dawn,
many others will arise,
new life will replace old,
affliction will be no more.
We shall be changed.


  1. An inspirational piece Elizabeth.
    Beautifully said.


  2. A day of rejoicing that will be... this is truly upbeat and promising!

  3. conjures up the joy of spring with a longing thats not painful... hope

  4. I feel the pain and the hope in this poem. Nice use of the prompt - the cure now is hope now.

  5. I like the feeling of hope in this!

  6. Amen! I love this...gives me a whole, warm feeling!