Notepad Scribblings of a Hobby Poet
Your piece perfectly describes how I feel about the ocean. Sometimes sea water, sea air, seem to be the only remedy.
I feel refreshed by your vision of clarity.
Great words for a beautiful picture.
My favourite place to go for clarity of thought is the seaside. Love your poem...
I certainly think so. Nice one.Pamela
Beauty in the words, totally reflects the clarity of the image. Wonderful!