January 23, 2011

In Permanence

Prompt from Sunday Scribblings: eternity

A ripple
        in eternity,
               between the
               horizons of time;
this world is temporary,
        transient.

4 comments:

  1. So very true and quite eloquently put.
    Pamela

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  2. oh! poignant, concise, beautiful! i love it!

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  3. Beautiful!
    And it looks rather like a sailboat, although I can't be sure you meant it that way.
    Ha, still very nice, I like it a lot.

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