October 23, 2010

Haiku for Autumn




   Summer’s fog dissolves
   Heat shimmers into color
   Autumn jewels emerge


   Prompt from Poetic Asides: change
   Prompt from Writer's Island: emerge
   Photo taken on my morning walk

8 comments:

  1. Beautiful image and words. Like the heat shimmering into colors, and "Autumn jewels."

    Elizabeth

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  2. i enjoyed this Dandelion, or whatever your name is -- you should also consider using this piece as the first three lines of a Tanka -- take us deeper into the essence of autumn, perhaps how it sounded or smelled, or made you feel...

    good work...!

    ...rob
    Image & Verse

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  3. E Johnson is your name, forgive me for missing that...

    ...rob

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  4. lovely photo and haiku - autumn jewels, nice!

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  5. summer's fog is a beautiful mystical setting of this revealing ku... i just can't get over the colors changing so naturally perfect... thank you dripping gray

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  6. Wonderful words to welcome Autumn, great Haiku!

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  7. A beautiful matching pair - haiku and photo.

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